How Until Dawn Ended Up With A 10,000 Page Script

When Graham Reznick and Larry Fessenden landed the gig to write Until Dawn in 2011, it seemed easy enough: write some dialogue! Known for working on horror films like House of the Devil and The Innkeepers, the two writers had actually taken on a way bigger task than they thought — they were signing on to write two games over four years.

“We’ve written 10,000 pages of dialogue,” said Fessenden, when I spoke to the duo last week.

Wait a minute. The behind-the-scenes material included with Until Dawn had pegged the game’s script at 1,000 pages. What’s the deal?

“I think someone at Sony didn’t believe us,” said Reznick.

“Maybe they meant 1,000 good pages!” said Fessenden. “There were 9,000 other pages.”

The biggest reason for Until Dawn‘s mammoth script was the lengthy development. When Until Dawn was revealed at Gamescom in 2012, it was a first-person action game for Sony’s Move controller. I broke down the differences in a previous story, but when the game disappeared for years, it wasn’t clear how far along it was. According to Fessenden, it was basically done.

“We can confirm [that] because we were done!” he said. “Then, we get another email that says ‘guys, we’re going into chapter seven and we’re just feeling like we can do better.’”

Sony and Supermassive decided to put Until Dawn under the knife, and while they kept many of the foundational elements — characters, general setting, horror cliches, etc. — the way players interacted with the story was changed completely. The first-person perspective, along with the game’s many combat and puzzle elements, were ditched entirely and story length was trimmed.

“The old version was a little bit more skewed toward gamers,” said Reznick. “It was also more of a satire. The second [version] with [protagonists] Mike and Jess going up to the cabin in the PS4 version — that whole sequence is pretty close to the original game, at least in terms of the dialogue. A lot of that was written for the PS3 version and carried over. Most of the original game was like that.”

Mike and Jess’s cabin romp was responsible for Reznick and Fessenden joining Until Dawn, actually. The two were asked with writing a scene before they were hired, and much of what they worked into that original pitch carried over into the game that shipped earlier this year.

What attracted them to Until Dawn was a growing frustration with modern horror audiences. Fans today, they argued, have grown up in an age of genre deconstruction — Scream, Cabin in the Woods — and, as a result, feel smugly superior to the characters they’re watching.

“Good horror movies are like a magic trick,” said Reznick, “and once you know the magic trick, the first thrill you have is gone. The magic of the trick gets more complicated each time.”

“It [Until Dawn] brings responsibility back to the player,” said Fessenden. “You’re no longer laughing at the choices the characters make, you’re actually making them. It almost subverts the subversion by making you responsible for the choices — you can’t just laugh at them in that safe place.”

To pull this off, the game had to make you care about the characters. Until Dawn’s archetype rolodex runs deep:There’s the dumb blonde (Jessica), the final girl (Sam), the token minority (Matt), and many others. If you’ve watched a few horror movies, you’ve seen this lineup before.

Emily, for example, is set up as the crabby woman who makes everyone else’s life miserable. The general consensus amongst fans is that Emily is that most difficult character to like, but a smaller group has rallied around Emily, especially given how her arc plays out later in the story.

“We set up these cliched characters, but you get to watch them deepen as you go along,” said Fessenden. ” […] She [Emily] does have some redeeming qualities at the end. Mostly, that she’s just proactive. She takes her bitchiness and uses it. But you have to witness that to see if she makes it that far. Each of the characters have a component of that, where the cliche is stripped away and exposed as something a little more interesting.”

“It mirrors, in some ways, the way we all act as teenagers when we’re still finding ourselves,” said Reznick. “We rope play our way through high school — at least, I did, and I know a lot of people I grew up with did, as well. Then, you leave high school and go out into the real world and go ‘oh, wait, I’m really not that kind of person at all. I thought that was the kind of person I needed to be to get through this.’ When you take people who are all doing that and throw them into a situation like the one in Until Dawn, you have those masks fall away very quickly.”

This was my experience with Jessica. When I realised the reason she was strutting her body around was to mask her own insecurities, I realised she was more interesting than your average sexpot cliche, and I wanted her to live. Reznick said the game’s choose-your-own adventure setup is what allowed for these nuances to be explored. In a more traditional slasher film, you might never give the character a chance to express these feelings; the film’s momentum might not allow it.

“We’ve written 10,000 pages of dialogue,” he said. “You’re bound to, just by default, have some more sincere [experiences] and contemplate what someone might say in a more vulnerable position. You get that kind of variation. It may not be [in] the number one script, but when you realise ‘Well, what else might happen in the scene? Well, how about something truthful?’”

I actually managed to keep Jessica around for a while, until one wrong move — why did I think it was OK to walk down a hallway alone? — put her in danger and her jaw was forcibly removed.

“I think it’s more powerful if you grow to like a character because of your influence on them,” said Reznick. “If they die at that point, that’s a much more powerful moment than if you just like them from the get go, and then it’s ‘oh, too bad, they’re gone.’”

One dramatic shift in the game’s script was due to technological advances in shifting to the PlayStation 4. The 2012 version, built for the PS3, had the characters spend a lot more time explaining their actions, but when motion capture was integrated thanks to the PS4’s higher horsepower, it was clear the actors’ expressions could carry some of the burden.

“We realised we could strip away a certain amount of dialogue,” said Fessenden, “and just have an actor indication: ‘they look puzzled.’”

The writers ditched other character details because they just didn’t work. Ashley, for example, used to be a drug addict who would go around the house pretending she was in an Agatha Christie novel. What?!

The actual process of writing the game was bizarre, too. Even besides the fact that the process took Reznick and Fessenden over four years, the game’s branching paths meant the writers were constantly juggling parallel universes in their head.

“It was like being schizophrenic inside multiple personalities inside the heads of twins that have multiple personalities,” laughed Reznick. “Which was kinda fun!”

They handled this by using a flow chart that kept track of how each character should feel based on what had happened to them. (I asked to see a screenshot of this, but was turned down.) Complicating matters was the order of development. Games are not made linearly, and Until Dawn‘s script had to accommodate. The first section they wrote, for example, was the game’s eighth chapter.

“If you want an easter egg,” said Fessenden, “We found one of the inconsistencies that doesn’t make sense because, clearly, we had so many things to juggle.”

Any ideas, Until Dawn fans?

Since the game’s release, the two have delighted in watching fans align themselves with one character or another and begin to develop their own stories about them.

“It’s been completely fascinating to watch people take these characters and spin their own stories about them,” said Reznick, “which is gratifying as a writer of the game because we spent a lot of time building out who these characters were.”

Maybe this will lead into an Until Dawn sequel, maybe not. The fans certainly want it, but we’ll have to see how Sony feels about the game… and how well it sells. Reznick and Fessenden spent four years and change working on the first one. Hopefully we won’t have to wait that long for another set of teenagers to get terrorised.